Tuesday, 16 May 2017

Science - Brain

2 comments:

  1. Nice job Abby! What I liked about your presentation was your choice of appearance and on the 4th slide (structure of the brain) how you said "in other words" and explained what you said in an easier way. Your next steps could be to add a diagram for the structure of the brain to support what you've stated and also to proof read each slide as some sentences don't make sense. Overall I think your presentation of the brain was very well done and I enjoyed learning about the brain!

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  2. I like the way you have added pictures too make it more attractive and eye catching. i think you need to spread out the information so its less to read other then that i think you have done a great job. well done.

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